Show+Not+Tell+(Winny)

=I arrive there, and i found a bench to seat in. I waited there for a long time and I heard someone beside talking about the destination they are going. The clock hanging above kept ticking, and I am starting to get impatient, I can't wait any longer, the woman beside me has boarded. I tapped my foot impatiently waiting. then there was noone coming until a shadow passes me.=

=I lie down, relax and enjoying the beautiful view. I touch the soft sand, its smooth and comfy. The day was turning dark, and the sun was going red, the sunlight shone to my face it was warm and nice. The glow of the sun was golden yellow. I heard the seaguls chirping. The sparkling water was ticking my feet. I can hear the wave going back and forth and again.= = = =It was dark and the wind was blowing to my face. The swing was having this creeking sound and it was really annoying to my ears. Noone was there, it was just me alone. I sat in the bottom of the slide and it was kind of rusty and old. I feel that it has been there frr many years, and noone was visiting it, it was abandoned. When I get up from the slide I feel that the slide is going to collapse. It was cold and Than the swing stops swinging.=