Redraft+of+The+Journey+One+(Edward+Kie)

=Composition=

== As I drew closer to the cave, I could see a beast guarding infront of the cave. I could see it clearly now, it was a creature with the combination of several animals. The first thing that alerted me to its presence was I must be careful and standby for an attack. In my mind, I thought that it will be a heavy fight.... a dangerous fight but I'll try my best to kill it. It started the fight when it began to alert that the beast's enemy was nearby. Knowing that I had to react quickly, I pulled out my sword. So, the beast had already planned a strategy and it flew to the air and it disappeared. It was in the right time that I need some help and luckily my two helpers, Jeremy and Christian, arrived at the place. They saw every movement from me and the beast from a roof of a house near the cave. They took their own equipment immediately from their bag and prepared for an attack. We were very careful in searching the beast to the air. Suddenly, I saw movements in the air and I kept following it, waited for the right time to attack. Not thinking of it, it suddenly attacked me and my two helpers with it's tail and legs. It hurts a lot. I discussed a strategy with my two helpers. This is what came to my thought, when I attacked it's tail, the beast would surely reappeared and fell to the ground. Then, my two helpers will immediately chop off it"s wings so that it can't fly anymore and I will dash towards the beast and chop its head off. I hope this strategy will work. I immediately ran and chop off it's tail. Then, the beast reappeared and it fell to the ground. My two helpers were hiding and they were ready for an ambush. They did an ambush by chopping off it's wings and it worked. The beast was struggling and I dashed quickly and I chopped it's head and it died. It was a heavy fight. Last, I was able to enter the cave with my two helpers. ==